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Post by Tigger on Aug 15, 2007 21:08:24 GMT -5
Welcome Gemini xD Ok, in here, we will be learning all the stuff behind the scenes of role playing, building your own site that really attracts attention (but you already know about that, WE is flourishing with members) and then a whole bunch of other cool stuff like that.
For starters, if you would write a very simple, short plot line. It has to be at least 6 sentences, but can be as brief as you can. Though try to make it kinda detailed, if that makes any sense at all. (if it were me writing it, I would be confused by now and ask.. haha, but that's cause I'm not good at wording things or the like of that)
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Post by Princess Gemini on Aug 15, 2007 21:31:23 GMT -5
Ok, I usually suck at writing plots, but I'll give it my best shot. Here goes nothing. Oh, this is a plot i wrote for my site just now.Love. Its a word that is not normal for a dark to feel, even if it isn't to strong. But one dark has a soft spot, though he won't admit it. Even if she isn't his true love, he still loves her. What happened was that the dark stallion called Kamau fell in love with one of his slaves, Cascadia. But he was frightened by what he felt, so he sent her away. But only after they had bred and she became pregnant with his children, twins. She was claimed by another stallion, but she soon left him, hoping that if she returned home, Kamau would allow her to stay. Well she went into labor and gave birth to a jet black colt and a bay filly. But a dark stallion was wandering in the birthing grounds that day, he heard her cries of agony from the birth, and cries of joy upon seeing her two beautiful foals. So he captured her and the two foals. Taking all three of them as slaves. After the filly was weaned, she was traded to another dark stallion. By this time Kamau had heard the news of his family, so he set off to save them. But he did not know about his filly being traded yet, so when he found out he was outraged. He managed to beat the dark stallion in battle and then took his colt and Cascadia home. then he set off to find his filly. He traveled for three days before he heard news of her. A tiny bay filly had been seen in the cells of a dark stag. He managed to break into the dungeon and rescue her. Taking her home to safety. but what will happen when both stags find out that their slaves have been taken? Will Kamau be able to protect them, or will he die trying? Only time will tell. [/blockquote] Its a little over 6 lines. I couldn't do it that short. I never post that short, so sorry if its to long.=]
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Post by Tigger on Aug 16, 2007 16:23:11 GMT -5
Excellent. Now if you could set up the main character, Kamau, with just basic info, such as name, age, gender, color, really brief personality.
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Post by Princess Gemini on Aug 16, 2007 18:24:23 GMT -5
Ok, here is his bio. But you don't want a history?
Name: Kamau Age: Eight Years Gender: Stallion Color: Pure ebony Personality: Kamau is not a horse you would want to come across. Vicious and mean. A savage brute that will always make sure he has what he wants. But he does have a soft spot. He would die to protect anybody he loved. Kamau is the typical dark stallion with a dark past. He will not take crap from anybody, and he would kill without a second thought. Kamau has lived seven painful years, and they all show through on his flesh. Kamau hates feeling like he is being watched, and he would go to extreme measures to avoid this.
How is that? I hope you don't mind if I mostly just copied and pasted from Kamau's bio on WE. If you do care, I can always re-do it. [/blockquote]
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Post by Tigger on Aug 17, 2007 16:01:25 GMT -5
Nope, no history. (they are quite annoying to write) Excellent bio, really, the only time I care if you copy and paste, is if it a role play lesson, I want all that to be new and fresh. Anyways, I take it the horse you described, very well. He sounds like just the character to really spice up a plot. Hmm, though your plot description was missing just a few things. I'll give you five hints, but you have to find them yourself. Hint #.. 1. I am something in the whole of the plot 2. I orginize 3. I recite the script 4. I explain the roles 5. I name the parts xD, I will be happy to name more, just ask me, and I shall give you five more.
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Post by Princess Gemini on Aug 17, 2007 23:35:40 GMT -5
It's kinda late and I'm tired. I've been trying to figure it out for several minutes. Could I have five more hints? I'm sure I can get it by then. And after I've figured it out, would you like me to re-do his bio? Something fresh and knew?
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Post by Tigger on Aug 19, 2007 13:22:30 GMT -5
Certainly, but after these hints, you can't ask for any more. And that would be because I can't think of any, so I'll just tell you ^^; 1. Nothing ^^; this was just to throw you off. You already have a very well written story behind the plot. 2. Headings. 3. The actual plot, what happens in it. 4. The characters. A really breif stat listing for each of the main characters, so that whoever plays them, can have a better understanding of what they are like 5. This was also just to throw you off.
Anyways, those three are optional. But whatever. Erm, if you want to re-do his stats, it's perfectly ok with me xD
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Post by Princess Gemini on Aug 21, 2007 12:14:52 GMT -5
Sorry, I just can't figure it out. I've never been to good at guessing things based off hints. My brain just doesn't work that way I guess.
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Post by Tigger on Aug 21, 2007 15:29:11 GMT -5
That's ok, mine is that way too, at least most of the time. Anyways those last five, weren't hints.. ^^; I think I already said that though. ok, so if you could now add those to your current plot story, that'd be great xD Oh, and any quesions, please ask.
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Post by Princess Gemini on Aug 22, 2007 14:13:50 GMT -5
Ok. Add what? Those five hints? The first five I mean? I can do that. But I will have to do it later. I have no muse. I used it all on a post that was 1,114 words the other day.
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Post by Tigger on Aug 22, 2007 19:57:06 GMT -5
Ooohh! Awesome xD Its fine, they really don't have to have tons of detail. Like example: Story
[/u] There once was a stallion, and he loved his land. Plot Line[/u] The stallion fights for his land, finds love, then dies at the end of the plot Plot Characters[/u] The characters bio, a history is not really needed much, but a very brief personality is always good xD Taken Characters[/u] List of characters, and if taken, by who.. though this is only optional. I really only do it to keep track of who is playing who and whatnot, and if that person cannot play that character, I can put it back in audition or something. Anyways, that was just an example of what a plot diagram could look like.. well, what mine look like. So, that was just the introductions. If there is anything that you would like to be specificly taught.. let me know, and we can begin the actual special class lessons xD[/center][/size]
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Post by Princess Gemini on Aug 24, 2007 9:16:27 GMT -5
Ok, thanks for clearing that up.
If you want me to re--write it I can. But if not, then I would like to learn the basis of writing a good and intriguing plot. I have written them before, and people said they were good, but I want to get better at writing them.
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Post by Tigger on Aug 25, 2007 8:09:09 GMT -5
Ok then.. I shall make a new thread then xD
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