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Post by angelfish on Aug 14, 2007 22:18:29 GMT -5
Username:Angel Fish Age:------ How long have you role played? Almost a month now... ^^ I know i'm a noob... Do you request a certain teacher?No How did you find us? Wild Equines. Example Post: A raindrop hit the dry terra. Then it was as if someone pulled the plug. It poured down. Thunder rang out into the silent air. Lightning struck the ground. A lonely black figure galloped along the empty area. He loved the rain. He grinned as he raced across the plain. He had thought about it. So what if his dad did what he did. He was free now. From his throat erupted a loud haunting whinny. It seemed to linger in the stormy air. A bolt of lightning struck near him. Demon sped up. He was now going as fast as his pillars would carry him a thundering noise sounded as every dagger slammed into the muddy earth.Muscles bulged with every swift motion, his dreads blowing madly behind him. His whipcord seemed to follow him. His skull held high. He stopped and his daggers dug into the muddy terra. He threw himself into the air. His forelegs flailing madly. He let out a shrill whinny. He then crashed back with a thudering noise. He then picked his gallop back up his muscles bulged. Raindrops stinging his bod. He pushed himself on. "Just....a little.....farther." He panted. His lungs burning. He ignored the burning senstation and pressed on searching for a home.
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Post by Tigger on Aug 15, 2007 20:06:25 GMT -5
Accepted: But, I have to disagree with your 'noob' skills. Actually, that example had advanced qualities. Your description was awesome! Though, I am wondering, why is he running through ran, and getting all muddy when he is just looking for a home. (bad question, it could be for many reasons.. most having to do with something in his past) Anyways, awesome work Angel xD I shall place you in intermediate as well, though you may be moved.. once again, this is simply to get a better idea at where you are. Thank-you for applying.
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