Tango
Intermediate Student
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Post by Tango on Aug 14, 2007 20:33:28 GMT -5
[glow=blue,1,200] Username: Tango Age: Sorreh ^^; How long have you role played? Since July 17, 2005 Do you request a certain teacher? Hikaru ^^ How did you find us? Tigger told and showed me.. Example Post: The wind whistled as it jumped off the cliff. The aroma was peaceful until the sound of beating hooves sounded. This place was very dark, no matter if it was day or night, here, it was always night. It seemed that darks were every corner that you turned, everywhere. Smirks placed upon each of their lips, curling evily. A seemed like glowing being appeared in the area, she hid in behind the trees and around everywhere she could, for she did not know where she stood. She looked around, nobody, she sighed. But then her ears perked up to the beginning noise. Hooves beated here and there, she looked around but saw nothing. She was starting to panic, not knowing anything almost, she was confused. She looked around and sighed, calming her heart-beat. She calmed down and quietly breathed, in and out. Then she listened for the next responsive noise..
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Post by Tigger on Aug 14, 2007 20:35:11 GMT -5
Student - Accepted: Again, your use of adjectives is awesome, but your example seemed a bit redundant. Try to elaborate more on what she may be feeling personally as she is being chased by the darks. I will place you in the intermediate class for now.
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Post by Hikaru on Aug 14, 2007 20:40:37 GMT -5
I Accept the position of being your teacher ^-^ Very flattered you asked for me *blush*
Anyway! I hope to have an awesome time with you and will be seeing you in the teaching boards. Hopefully, with a bit of luck and some good practice, you'll be passing out of here in no time and ready to roleplay just as good as anyone out there! =3
I will refrain from critique and such right now being as these are only example posts. However, if you have questions or anything, simply pm me ^^ I will get back to you as soon as possible. Also, keep in mind this will be similar to real school, as you may already know... Tigger probably put that up somewhere xP [/size]
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