Post by Princess Gemini on Sept 10, 2007 15:44:56 GMT -5
Ok, I will just use the plot I just posted but I will lengthen it and add more detail leading to the climax.
Long ago, when the world was young, a single soul was born. Some say she came from the flames, some say she came from the waves, and others say she came from the earth herself. Nobody is sure exactly where she came from, only that she is the mother of all living things. A single equine, with a pelt as white as snow. Her name is not certain, though she is now called Mother Earth. The mother of all things, the sea which so gracefully hits against the shores, or so violently rocks the ships. Everything that grows, whether it be big or small. Some say she had feathered wings, while others say she bore only a gold horn on her crown. Others say she was a shape shifter, taking form of anything she desired. For hundreds of years she ruled the world with her gentle hand, nothing happened that she had not planned out and put much detail into. The Elders decided she was doing fine on her own, but they soon thought she might need a Father Earth to help her along. So they gathered together two immortal equines, both with a very unique mark. A sign that they were the chosen ones to give birth to Father Earth. Many times they tried to conceive, and many times they failed. The marking that the parents bore was a single white snip in the shape of a winged and horned equine.[/blockquote]
Days turned into years, years turned into decades, and decades turned into millenniums. Mother Earth was lost to the world by this time. Nobody knew where she had gone, but the world had gone into utter chaos without their mother. Killing, fighting, and just plain cruelty became a day to day routine for most equines. there are few that are still loyal to her, the others believed she had abandoned them. But several questions remain now, where did she go? Why would she leave her children to suffer all alone? Was she even still alive? After decades of trying, the two immortals finally conceived. A colt was born, he bore her mark, the mark his parents also bore. With a gold horn to match and feathered wings. But in his birth they perished, he was to powerful for the mother to give birth to, and without the fathers love and soul mate, he perished from the heartbreak. though they were cursed to walk to earth for all eternity, they could be harmed just as easily as any normally equine. Orphaned at birth he survived against all odds, he was to be the father of all things. It was his duty to find Mother Earth and bring her back, wherever she may be. He grew into a handsome young stallion, and it was on his second birthday he learned of his calling, his destiny. To find mother earth and bring her back, to rule all living things along with her. While Mother Earth would be queen of all things that live, he would be king of all things that died. Hades was what his mother called him at birth, king of the Underworld and all dead things. Together Hades and Mother Earth (whom was named Persephone, Hades later found out). A name fitting for him, as well as a name fitting for Persephone. He would pass through different dimensions, go to different planes, go through heaven and hell, fire and water, until he found Persephone and brought her back. But the question that remains is this, will he succeed? You will be the judge of that.
How is that?